Thursday, September 22, 2011

Response 2

1. If I could rewrite my paper, I would expand the examples I chose and use more parts of the story instead of focusing on one main part of the overall story.

2. One of my biggest strengths was word choice and the content. I wrote good examples and had a strongly written third topic. My ideas stayed consistant throughout the paper. My weaknesses would be transitioning my sentences and making the paper flow.

3. The prewriting and brainstorming helped me the most when writing this paper. It helped me organize my information, and was a reference I went back to continously in order to write my paper.

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